Dawn had wandered off into a small opening in the woods near the wood elf village, looking for Elvin berries. She quickly found some and began picking the ripe, purple fruit. She was so lost in her thoughts that the quiet, clumsy footsteps she should’ve heard were silent to her ears. Dawn suddenly had a prickly feeling crawling up her back, and she quickly turned around. Oh! Zared everywhere! She quickly grabbed her bow that she always kept with her, and drew out and shot arrows with lightning speed. But it wasn’t enough. She had been so focused that she didn’t think to scream. Then an unusually tall Zared jumped up and threw an icky black, foul-smelling slime ball at her. She tried to call out, but the smelly mass covered her quickly and she soon blacked out.
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~LaLa
Love it! Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeletewhoa whoa! sounds cool! can't wait to read more! : )
ReplyDeleteThis is really good Lauren. =) If you need some inspiration, I would suggest reading a trilogy called Icewind Dale by R.A. Salvatore. It is by far my favorite set of books. =) I can't wait to see more of your stuff.
ReplyDeletesounds cool! Its kinda hard to read tho with the green lettering :D Just thought I'd let ya know!
ReplyDelete~Kaylie
yeah, I was trying to fix the background sorry :) :) :) Thanks guys!!!
ReplyDelete~Lauren