Monday, November 2, 2009

Okay, here is a preview of my book, which is in progress, called Wood Elves. At least, that's the title for now :) well, here it is!

Dawn had wandered off into a small opening in the woods near the wood elf village, looking for Elvin berries. She quickly found some and began picking the ripe, purple fruit. She was so lost in her thoughts that the quiet, clumsy footsteps she should’ve heard were silent to her ears. Dawn suddenly had a prickly feeling crawling up her back, and she quickly turned around. Oh! Zared everywhere! She quickly grabbed her bow that she always kept with her, and drew out and shot arrows with lightning speed. But it wasn’t enough. She had been so focused that she didn’t think to scream. Then an unusually tall Zared jumped up and threw an icky black, foul-smelling slime ball at her. She tried to call out, but the smelly mass covered her quickly and she soon blacked out.


Thanks!!!

~LaLa

5 comments:

  1. Love it! Can't wait to read more!

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  2. whoa whoa! sounds cool! can't wait to read more! : )

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  3. This is really good Lauren. =) If you need some inspiration, I would suggest reading a trilogy called Icewind Dale by R.A. Salvatore. It is by far my favorite set of books. =) I can't wait to see more of your stuff.

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  4. sounds cool! Its kinda hard to read tho with the green lettering :D Just thought I'd let ya know!

    ~Kaylie

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  5. yeah, I was trying to fix the background sorry :) :) :) Thanks guys!!!

    ~Lauren

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